crazyME56

Changed my book name to ""Surviving Long Distance"" Cause the first title wasn't suitable..
          	Anyways, make sure you check out my book and also vote and comment!
          	Um.. I guess that's pretty much it..
          	But yeah I love unicorns, food, books and my parrot. 
          	And I love books. I guess I mentioned it before. And I also love books.
          	I'm superr antisocial :)!
          	And rainbows, okay?
          	So I hope to find people (unicorns) who are just like me..
          	Are you? Are you? Are you?
          	Okay I'll just shut up because I'm freakin you out.
          	Oh, and my name isn't crazyME... it's just I'm really crazy (as you already know).
          	Um.. okay enough of blabbering. 
          	Go check out my book I'm also working on a new story (non fiction).
          	Go.. Go I'm waiting for you to add my book to b your library. 
          	*waits* Done? Done? Done? Good, unicorn! :*
          	If yiu haven't till yet,  GO!
          	Okay bye!
          	Much love,
          	Unicorn. ♡

TheCabIntoxicated

hey please check out my stories if u gets the chance

TheCabIntoxicated

@crazyME56 okay
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crazyME56

@TheCabIntoxicated Yes.. first few chapters aren't that good.. but I've improvised further. You know as this is my first ever book, though I gave it a try. Go on further I bet you'll notice the change and improvisation. :)
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TheCabIntoxicated

@crazyME56 hey urs is great and has an amazing story line but you might wanna space of ur chapters make them longer and be more descriptive.  like when she was asking for him to give her the keys your could say please ... give me the keys she said with desperation in her voice and  lust in her eyes. and u could say the guy grudgingly gave her the keys
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crazyME56

Changed my book name to ""Surviving Long Distance"" Cause the first title wasn't suitable..
          Anyways, make sure you check out my book and also vote and comment!
          Um.. I guess that's pretty much it..
          But yeah I love unicorns, food, books and my parrot. 
          And I love books. I guess I mentioned it before. And I also love books.
          I'm superr antisocial :)!
          And rainbows, okay?
          So I hope to find people (unicorns) who are just like me..
          Are you? Are you? Are you?
          Okay I'll just shut up because I'm freakin you out.
          Oh, and my name isn't crazyME... it's just I'm really crazy (as you already know).
          Um.. okay enough of blabbering. 
          Go check out my book I'm also working on a new story (non fiction).
          Go.. Go I'm waiting for you to add my book to b your library. 
          *waits* Done? Done? Done? Good, unicorn! :*
          If yiu haven't till yet,  GO!
          Okay bye!
          Much love,
          Unicorn. ♡