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@ delicatessss  I am so excited!! Just give me new chapterss

thank you, but i only rewriting certain chapters that i don't like anymore and keep the rest of the storyline 

@ delicatessss  ofc oh and mj still tutoring wheezie right? This way we will see more rafe and mj because she is literally in his house so they maybe getting closer yk. This way they are seeing real themselves

@406airi we'll see about it, stay tuned okayyyy

@ delicatessss  thats good.So your gonna start 22, 23 ,24 . Do you remember malia go out with rafe to kook party ? Maybe you should start here. And expressing their feelings more and more. Because around these chapter rafe starting feelings for her I think and malia as well. Omg I am so excited to see your new characters!!

@ delicatessss  yeah ı get it. But I don't know you already deleted 3 chapters ı suppose. I really dont know because I don't know if you want deleted more chapter. But I think you should continue where is rafe and malia have a fight yk remember right its about trevor then rafe apologize to Her. And in the same chapter kelce learns mj and rafe together and he offers rafe to get her to the kook party . You should continue this because it will be fun mj and kelce have or some kook have a interacted

@406airi up yesss thanks for agreeing with me and i do think my couple last chapters seem to be out of context and that's why it took me weeks to finish  anyway, do you think i should republish the chapters or leave it while i rewriting it?

@ delicatessss  yes me too. I don't like your last story chapters.Like they just out of the context. Yes they should be writer complex because rafe in early seasons very complex character. And barry... Oh man I don't like barry yeah he is interesting but just no. And I dont want barry to pester mj and rafe relationships yk. They are nothing serious.And I remember in earlier chapters like around 10 -30 we see more barry and mj rather than rafe. I wanna see mj and rafe they should have more scenes yk. Because of devoloping their feelings and rafe's changes. So they should be more intimate.

@ delicatessss  yes ı am noticed now and dont worry your storyline is so good. Just I wanna read more of mj and rafe together... I love them. So when is new chapter?