delicatessss

unpublished some of the chapters but i'll publish them back once i'm done with the rewriting. stay tuned ✨

406airi

@ delicatessss  I am so excited!! Just give me new chapterss
Balas

delicatessss

changing my book's title and cover 

406airi

@ delicatessss  ofc oh and mj still tutoring wheezie right? This way we will see more rafe and mj because she is literally in his house so they maybe getting closer yk. This way they are seeing real themselves
Balas

delicatessss

@406airi we'll see about it, stay tuned okayyyy
Balas

406airi

@ delicatessss  thats good.So your gonna start 22, 23 ,24 . Do you remember malia go out with rafe to kook party ? Maybe you should start here. And expressing their feelings more and more. Because around these chapter rafe starting feelings for her I think and malia as well. Omg I am so excited to see your new characters!!
Balas

delicatessss

i've been rereading "close to you" chapter by chapter and i just realized how i don't like certain storylines and my style of writing. i'm thinking about rewriting some of them back with a different plot

406airi

@ delicatessss  yeah ı get it. But I don't know you already deleted 3 chapters ı suppose. I really dont know because I don't know if you want deleted more chapter. But I think you should continue where is rafe and malia have a fight yk remember right its about trevor then rafe apologize to Her. And in the same chapter kelce learns mj and rafe together and he offers rafe to get her to the kook party . You should continue this because it will be fun mj and kelce have or some kook have a interacted
Balas

delicatessss

@406airi up yesss thanks for agreeing with me and i do think my couple last chapters seem to be out of context and that's why it took me weeks to finish  anyway, do you think i should republish the chapters or leave it while i rewriting it?
Balas

406airi

@ delicatessss  yes me too. I don't like your last story chapters.Like they just out of the context. Yes they should be writer complex because rafe in early seasons very complex character. And barry... Oh man I don't like barry yeah he is interesting but just no. And I dont want barry to pester mj and rafe relationships yk. They are nothing serious.And I remember in earlier chapters like around 10 -30 we see more barry and mj rather than rafe. I wanna see mj and rafe they should have more scenes yk. Because of devoloping their feelings and rafe's changes. So they should be more intimate.
Balas

delicatessss

i've decided to unpublished chapter 73 and 74 because i don't actually like how the story is going and i want to change the storylines. sorry if the next chapter would take forever but i'll be right back with moreeeee chaos. thanks and love yall 

406airi

@ delicatessss  yes ı am noticed now and dont worry your storyline is so good. Just I wanna read more of mj and rafe together... I love them. So when is new chapter?
Balas