devil-is-a-girl

I wonder what you think about MC? I bet you already noticed that she has no name on purpose so you can identify better with the role (besides the nickname Kitty we know so well) ~ I put a lot of my own characteristics into the MC (being messy, making music, stubborn etc.) and things I would like to be more... wild, free, independent…

MELANCHOLISM-

I stumbled on your fanfic and read the description. I just wanna say, I too am a mother of two, happily married, but still fantasize 2D men (preferably Sylus)

devil-is-a-girl

@ MELANCHOLISM-  what i was originaly wanted to reply was: great, let's be friends. ^\\^
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devil-is-a-girl

@ MELANCHOLISM-  Hello there fellow. ^\\^ I noticed you are the one writing all those fantastic fanfics. *_* Thanks for reaching out.
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devil-is-a-girl

I wonder what you think about MC? I bet you already noticed that she has no name on purpose so you can identify better with the role (besides the nickname Kitty we know so well) ~ I put a lot of my own characteristics into the MC (being messy, making music, stubborn etc.) and things I would like to be more... wild, free, independent…

AAudriue

ideas! : imagine if y/n (us) came home drunk (maybe cuz of work party or wtv) and then xavier (sober) drove us back to our apartment.. but instead of going back to his own, he came to our room and tryna do somethn with us.. but before he could do somethn he was interupted by something! or someone... (maybe mepshito stalked us and told sylus abt it) (y/n tried to knock him off but failed cuz she was drunky)

devil-is-a-girl

@AAudriue But at that point "Charity Ball / Back on Track" Xavier was just a side kick... but his role is growing and now I have already other plans for his development... I could revise the chapter though... (just him going for rape is not quite in character for him... jealous yes... but that... no~) I will think about it...
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devil-is-a-girl

@ AAudriue  i thought about that event after the charité ball...
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devil-is-a-girl

So what do you think so far? I am open fot discussion.  I wonder if I got Sylus charakter on point in your opinion?

devil-is-a-girl

@ devil-is-a-girl  i try my best... ‍↕️
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AAudriue

@devil-is-a-girl its always on point! you did a great job! :D
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