dpriince

New draft of chapter 1 has gone LIVE 
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/976448022-killing-boys-chapter-one

_HEROWIN_

Thank you so much for the feedback, it was great reading your comments and your viewpoints on Peace and Gigi were very insightful and interesting too. For Pearce, I do have hints of his, as you put it, humanising moments sprinkled in a little later as I just didn't want to rush that and it might just be because I love more slower unlayering of these type of characters but you're suggesting was much appreciated, thanks again!

dpriince

@_HEROWIN_ you're so welcome! it was a really enjoyable read. I definitely felt that you were leading up to revealing some new layers of Pearce, which will be super interesting to see. thank you for your comments too, also greatly appreciated! :)
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dpriince

the first chapter of my story LIABILITY, a sister story to killing boys, is up. There's no connection to Olivia or Noah, the story takes place in the same world, between two other schools briefly mentioned in killing boys; Parkland High and Eastern Hills. 
          
          Ashton Day transfers schools with the prospect of a new life, new friends and a new future, until a familiar face returns and sends all his progress down the drain. Now he must keep his addiction a secret from his past and his present. 
          
          It's very unlikely that this will be updated any time soon, and when it is, expect an entirely new story to replace it. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/264480036-liability

dpriince

So this draft of killing boys has been FINISHED! 
          
          If you think you've read it before, trust me, you haven't. It's all new. And in the coming months I will be revising once more to rewrite this story to something both entertaining and important. Please let me know your thoughts and feelings, no matter how cruel or harsh. I need to know them all. 
          
          Essentially, Olivia Holland will never die. She will be my passion project until I am no more.

dpriince

@Genisis9 you sure did! you can read the current version of my story available now or if you feel like waiting, sitting on it a while, the next draft may be up in a month or so :)
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Genisis9

@dpriince Ooh, I see I picked a good time to discover your page for the first time
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