@Halevetica I don't understand why someone would leave a comment like that unless it's constructive criticism! There is really no need to put someone down and make them doubt themselves without giving any input to help solve the so called problems they found. You should be really proud of yourself for practicing and continuing to update even through all the negative comments. I'm glad I could help with my comments, but honestly I'm just speaking the truth! You should have more faith in yourself!!! Honestly, you made me get the courage to finally try writing a story of my own so thank you too!!!!!:)