akira

of course, mll! ill read it when i find time but also thank you for adding mine as well, it is highly appreciated. :)

that’s classified.

my name is Akira, I didn’t necessarily just start writing though, as many of my ideas have just been under wraps.

hey. sorry for not seeing the first one immediately! but, if you get to my initial comment first that’s great. ill just put it here in a list:
            
            - description: this includes characters, the setting, even subtle descriptions inside of a characters dialogue. description is probably well intended  for every perspective.
            - perspective: choose one perspective and stick to it, because it may be confusing to readers when you speak from an subjective (personal) thoughts instead of acting as your character and thinking how they would think. Same thing applies for 3rd person. If it’s second person you’d be assuming the readers actions.
            - organization/transitions: transitioning gives more clarity, such as sentences that involve depth on what the reader is walking into.
            
            I also recommend organizing your facts or story with google documents, vomit your thoughts on one document and edit from there, while also using ChatGPT, you can copy and paste your story and ask the A.I for suggestions or tips on how to advance your story while also building it to your liking completely.
            
            hope this helps
            x, Akira.