elleinthesun

HELLO LOVLIESSS,
          	go read my book, 'Because Of Jay' RIGHT NOW! 
          	I just published a new chapter so go enjoy it!!!

Myorginal

Hey I found you on Skin and bones and I noticed that you really liked it, I personally just written a book called, "I hide behind a mask." And it's about a girl named Caitlin who pretends to someone she's not, another girl named Destiny commits suicide the next day. The more Caitlin finds out, the deeper trouble she getting into. I'm looking for new readers and opinions on it, if you could read it and let me know what you think, that would be amazing and if not that's totally okay too, but I just thought I would ask. :)

Myorginal

@elleinthesun Thank you for the feedback, and I'll see what I can do. :)
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elleinthesun

@Myorginal  okay so ive only read the first chapter but here's what ive gathered, your character seems pretty interesting but the pace is too fast. I also noticed that some of your spellings and grammar is a bit off and im sure if you fixed it your book would be a hit
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elleinthesun

@Myorginal omg yes id love too
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