ellie_turns4u

I JUST added another poem to Skin-Deep called “some days!” Go check it out!!

ellie_turns4u

I JUST POSTED my second poem “January” in my new poetry collection!! Please check it out :) I’ll be posting new poems every day or every few days, so make sure to keep an eye out!!

ellie_turns4u

@Heartstrings66 thank you!!
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Heartstrings66

@ ellie_turns4u  Wow! ☺️
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thetorturedpoetess

hi there !
          
          thank you for following me !  It truly means alot<3 I hope you enjoy reading my work, if you do, I'd love it if you vote and share your thoughts in the comments ! 
          
          yours sincerely,
          thetorturedpoetess

ellie_turns4u

Of course! I’ll be sure to check out your works, and I’d be happy if you’d do the same for me :)
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ellie_turns4u

Happy Holidays, everyone!! Enjoy your time spent with family and loved ones and always remember that you are so loved <3

Heartstrings66

@ ellie_turns4u  thank you
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Heartstrings66

@ ellie_turns4u  thank you
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ellie_turns4u

I just posted the FINAL POEM for Joythief!! I promise, this is actually the last one :) Please go check it out and let me know your overall thoughts on my first poetry book!!

ellie_turns4u

@novelistASH Thank you so much for your feedback! I’ll be sure to take it into account for my next work :)
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novelistASH

@ellie_turns4u The first section of insecurity is strong, but wavers towards overly technical or guarded places. The poems about growing up was kind of a wrestling with reality rather than idealism, but it fell short of the mark for me. The poems about love were mostly about longing or angst and were fine. "Instalove" was a stand out thematically, but sill lacked a connection. The final part had my favorite poems of the set. Many were more focused in terms of messaging and tended to be less bogged down by a technical approach.
            
            I think in general the work shows strong insight that can develop into compelling poetry, but the voice is a little too safe. Personally I'd like to see the work get into the drama of an event or situation more than the fretting that comes after or from a lack.
            
            Big picture: a promising collection. After over 40 poems I saw more growth than stagnation and I always consider that a great sign. I hope you keep writing. Best of luck.
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novelistASH

@ellie_turns4u You can't end the book at 49 poems. You're too close to 50!
            
            I don't have all the poems held in my mind at once. I shall try to go through and consider them in their entirety when I make the time.
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Izel_Ruby

 Chapter One is live!
          
          The Blood Moon has risen, the veil has thinned, and the invitation has been sent.
          
          Dive into Chapter One now and let me know your thoughts..
          vote ⭐, comment, and share if it pulls you in.
          This is only the beginning.
          
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