@euroucake I've never wrote one so if you flop, not my fault trust, BUTTTTT
I think something that will catch a readers attention is just subtle intimate things.
for ex, eye contact at a party or celebration of some sort, and person A quickly pulls their phone out and text them a goofy message, person B opens their phone and giggles/laughs from across the room
and eventually they get less subtle, and more couple-like, if that makes sense?
starts off with person A not realizing their feelings, then they start developing, but I feel like you shouldn't just say "oh person A has a crush!" instead, I feel like, "oh, person A gets tingles in their stomach when person B plays with their hair."
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