fritz_kylei

I understand that I don't have many followers but could somebody please check out my  story its my 1st one and I feel like im not leaning towards the right way. Can somebody give me some constructive criticism because I feel like im not doing this right.

fritz_kylei

I understand that I don't have many followers but could somebody please check out my  story its my 1st one and I feel like im not leaning towards the right way. Can somebody give me some constructive criticism because I feel like im not doing this right.