awesomejasvi

If you don't mind, could you please check the story of mine? I can delete it if it's bothersome. I wanna know if you find it interesting or not. You can stop reading it if it's not but I'm hoping you'll continue. I'm very open for criticisms too. I want to know if there's something I should change the way I write hehe :D. Thank you very much for reading this. 
          
          Have a nice day!
          
          -jasv, the author.
          
          Here's the link 
          
          : https://www.wattpad.com/story/315767715?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=awesomejasvi&wp_originator=Q21d7ys0z1MjlHdBp%2F%2FrADtiVuNBTHj0Fc76bZRofml95Cd8vi8NcyYLBK6qn%2B%2FuqHpZWQWuZI3AZd1TkziofoCktWn%2B3OsnF%2BgQbbkU87zNDfA%2BWTKrWQ324y%2FD6Koj