Just wanted to let you know that I appreciate your constructive comments. I will take them in consideration when I re-write Road Crew for publishing.
Keep up the good comments and take care.
@stefd68 lol I do like it, and no problem. At first I almost didn't continue but over just a couple chapters your writing made leaps and bounds. Not that it was bad before lol just got better. You deserve the votes, glad I could help