You doubt yourself way too much! I’m an old ass woman and enjoyed reading it, immensely! Couple of hiccups here and there grammatically, but nothing to get all upset over. If this is your first book, kudos, you’ve accomplished what a lot of people don’t…you finished it! Pat yourself on the back, you did a great job! I, personally, loved Aiden and Avery’s love story. I’m not as interested in Xavier and Summer as I am about Vincenzo and Aria. Xavier and Summer are predictable, Vincenzo and Aria are a complete mystery and I’m fascinated. Good job!