Yesirah

@annayaung u're wlcm

@annayaung u can complete it
          It's nice

@annayaung And again make sure u Don't give off ur story content in the story description 
          Make them curious to the extent that they will wantu read the book

@annayaung it's pretty good 
          I hope u won't be offended by my comment
          Ur story is amazing and u are very good with ur words and all But I feel u should be able to write something new.
          U've given out the whole story content even with the short summary u gave 
          And i feel stories like that are too common 
          Almost everyone is writing about cold CEO and someone that will will melt it
          I feel u should be able to write something out if the ordinary with this pretty brain that u have 
          I'm not saying u should stop writing the story
          U can finish it but make sure ur next book would not be something common 
          I hope i was able to help
          Thank u
          And u can do well to follow and vote for my book