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@JacceB sure thing, i really enjoyed the book. thank you for sharing! :)

sarena_a

hello, fellow wattpader! 
          
          i just read your recent comment on, straighter than parallel parking, and i thought i would tell you how glad i am that you made a comment on it!
          
          thank you so much for your positive criticism, it was absolutely wonderful to read something that could help shape my writing and to make me a more efficient writer -- i thank you very much for addressing your points and for also being very positive in how you presented them! c: 
          
          when i started the story, i did it just for the rule of nano -- i had a personal goal of writing as much as i physically and emotionally could in the shortest amount of time, and i hadn't really spent the time to start editing any of the grammatical errors (first drafts are taxing, we all must admit!) first time around. 
          
          i WILL now write a note in the beginning of my story to make sure that the readers are aware that as soon as i complete or get enough time to revise my story, i'll be using microsoft word/personal editor to look over the small errors that have missed my judgement. [i'd use word as of now, but the shift from there to the wattpad format is too difficult and it get's messy, unfortunately]. 
          
          of course, there is no excuse and i'll be sure to effectively and immediately [as soon as i possibly can!] to go over the story with more attention to detail and making sure to create a more enjoyable sitting for my readers! 
          
          thank you so much for taking the time to spend making a small comment on my story and for checking out a story you weren't sure if you wanted to read it. it really, really makes me feel ten times more enthusiastic about writing and your words meant a bucket load! <3
          
          i hope you have a truly wonderful day c: regards, sarena x