FayWil143

Hey, you probably won't see this or you wont care but I just wanted to say that I like the book and it has potential but (in my opinion) you need to make it longer, give more details, and stretch out the girls life after his death. Or at least make them older. You don't have to take my suggestions. It was just a thought 

_sumayaa300

@FayWil143 lol i agree definently 
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