wonderfall-

Hᴇʟʟᴏ, Iᴏᴇɴᴏ! I'ᴍ ᴊᴜsᴛ sᴛᴏᴘᴘɪɴɢ ʙʏ ᴛᴏ ʟᴇᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ᴋɴᴏᴡ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀʀᴀɢʀᴀᴘʜ ʜᴀs ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴄʀɪᴛɪǫᴜᴇᴅ. Pʟᴇᴀsᴇ sᴇᴇ ᴘᴀɢᴇ 48, ᴘᴏsᴛ #1195
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/774503/1175/25/first-paragraphs.-how-good-is-yours-critiques.

ioeno_

Okay, thanks so much :)
Balas

suicidalnight_

It was like 2 or 3 weeks ago on ur thread....That u closed. I suck at remembering too sooo its alright

suicidalnight_

@ioeno_ Thank youu. I might use it but if I dont I'll dedicate a chapter to u and yeaa. Lol
Balas

suicidalnight_

@ioeno_ Can u check ur computer or something? Maybe u can find it there with angel_serenity on it. Idk
Balas