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Just created a book called Incomprehensible! Another gabenath book to not miss. Hope you enjoy.

The book called Bluer Than Emotions will have a rewrite. as i notice i sucked at everything last year

Hey, I just have a small recommendation for you! You have really good grammar and spelling, but I just want to let you know that you should try to drag out your scenes a bit. Make them longer, and more time consuming to read. It keeps the story from moving too fast for a person to catch up. I noticed that the scenes skip over each other and overlap a bit. Of course this is just a recommendation, so you don't need to use this. I just think it might help you out a bit!