justcallmejoan_

NO SPOILERS:
          	
          	Im genuinely physically ill after Volume 1 of s5 of ST. Like I finished at 12:30 quite literally shaking, tachardic, and with a headache feeling like I'm overheating, and I still have a headache 3hrs later bro like calm down.
          	
          	BUT OMG THAT WAS CRAZY LIKE HELLO???

R1zzard_of-0z

@justcallmejoan_ nvm it’s crazy wdym will gets powers
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R1zzard_of-0z

@justcallmejoan_ dont encourage her dawg
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justcallmejoan_

@R1zzard_of-0z your sister is right
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justcallmejoan_

NO SPOILERS:
          
          Im genuinely physically ill after Volume 1 of s5 of ST. Like I finished at 12:30 quite literally shaking, tachardic, and with a headache feeling like I'm overheating, and I still have a headache 3hrs later bro like calm down.
          
          BUT OMG THAT WAS CRAZY LIKE HELLO???

R1zzard_of-0z

@justcallmejoan_ nvm it’s crazy wdym will gets powers
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R1zzard_of-0z

@justcallmejoan_ dont encourage her dawg
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justcallmejoan_

@R1zzard_of-0z your sister is right
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justcallmejoan_

You know that audio where it's like:
          
          "OMG who wrote this?!?"
          
          That's how I feel when I rewrite my old stuff.
          
          BTW finishing rewrite of "Where Are We" tonight :)

justcallmejoan_

@R1zzard_of-0z I did i just finished dinner
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R1zzard_of-0z

did you eat today gorjous 
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KaysieOdessa

HelloJoan, How Are you Well, I know this is strange, but I would like to ask several questions.
          First of all, I'm a big fan of your writing a lot, it's very cool, and it was a big reason why I started my writing.
          But I am facing some problems, which are as follows:
          First: how to find out the appropriate reaction For example, I want to make all the characters interact, but at the same time I just want the important characters to interact without forgetting the characters in the background, as I feel bad when I forget a character.
          Second: regarding editing and narrative style... how did you develop your narrative He is very good and eye-catching. How to do it I really want to find out, please.
          Thirdly: in my feedback story, I want to build a plot in the background as you did in your own story about the reaction BNHA, where it was good and at the same time displays the reaction in a good way without making any scene look fragile, weak or emotionless.
          Can you help me Thank you, and it's Okay... I appreciate your writing.

KaysieOdessa

@ KaysieOdessa  Oh my god, thank you very, very much for all these tips. To be honest, I didn't expect you to answer my question, or at least take longer . But thanks again, and I will work on applying these tips in my writing to improve my writing as well. (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ 
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justcallmejoan_

@KaysieOdessa 
            
            Okay round 3.
            
            -Characterization. I hate it when I am reading and a character does something so out of character for them and thier ideals. Unless in a crack-fic or there is a reason (past thing happened to them in fic or was previously changed/mentioned) Im not a fan. I (PERSONALLY) try to make my characters act like they actually would in each situation I put them in.
            DICLAIMER I am not saying everyone had to write in character, cause fic are literally all fanon and you can do whatever the hell you want with the characters, but *my personal* preference when *I* write or read is that i value characterization.
            
            3. For a background plot, I kind of just hook onto things in the reactions and run with it. Having Dabi and Hawks drama? Straight from the reaction. Hawks' problems? My own personal headcanons.
            Sometimes having them have little conversations before/after the reaction can help with them as they have to talk to each other as there is nothing else to do.  This can create smaller plots in the background to work off of.
            
            I really hope these helped and happy writing to you! :)
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justcallmejoan_

Hey yall,
          
          I'm gonna try to be more active in my editing now.  I did updtae "Where are we" a bit more and added like 500 words so there is that. Uhm. Yeah idk what else to say now but there it is.
          
          I may work more on the next chapter as well cause editing will take me forever, and now that I'm home I have (a bit) more free time. Yall deserve *something* after waiting so long lol. So look out for updates!

R1zzard_of-0z

Hows everyone doing w their finals and exams 

justcallmejoan_

@R1zzard_of-0z turns out I actually had a B- so...
             #winning
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R1zzard_of-0z

@justcallmejoan_ Thats alright dawg I have 3 Cs rn
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Bearberrry_

My thesis defense is on Monday. I am NOT graduating. 

Yokaze

@Bearberrry_ So...How did it go?
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R1zzard_of-0z

@Bearberrry_ Good luck anyway dawg, you never know wheb a miracle might happen
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Yokaze

@Bearberrry_ Welp, good luck fella.
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