kaylen1015

I going to write my new story I hope you guys like it

YourBlindGalaxy

*long sigh*
          Okay! 
          Hi! I'm Dawn, and I have a bit of advice for you...
          Put some periods. In. Your. Sentences! 
          I'm sorry but this just drives me nuts! I read your Gaster Sans X Reader and you went SEVERAL PARAGRAPHS without a single period, question mark, exclamation point, comma, or apostrophe. And please try to fix your grammar, I couldn't even get through one of your chapters without repeatedly facepalming.