*long sigh*
Okay!
Hi! I'm Dawn, and I have a bit of advice for you...
Put some periods. In. Your. Sentences!
I'm sorry but this just drives me nuts! I read your Gaster Sans X Reader and you went SEVERAL PARAGRAPHS without a single period, question mark, exclamation point, comma, or apostrophe. And please try to fix your grammar, I couldn't even get through one of your chapters without repeatedly facepalming.