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keylalovered

Sep 10, 2015 08:55AM

It is my first history.Can you say if it is good or no?

Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  and one thing more. Be original, you need something that differentiates it from others stories.

May 20, 2018 • Reply

Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  hey!, really the plot it's not bad, but i don't understand what is the point of this history. She found love, and she was raped, and so what? Maybe if you put a little effort, it will go better
          	  
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May 20, 2018 • Reply

keylalovered

Sep 10, 2015

It is my first history.Can you say if it is good or no?

Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  and one thing more. Be original, you need something that differentiates it from others stories.

May 20, 2018 • Reply

Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  hey!, really the plot it's not bad, but i don't understand what is the point of this history. She found love, and she was raped, and so what? Maybe if you put a little effort, it will go better
            
            Att: Ale&Mar

May 20, 2018 • Reply

keylalovered

Sep 07, 2015

I don't write still, but I will start in this weekend but I prefer write in Spanish because I am learning how to do it. If you have any question can you write me. 
          I am learn Sapnish and English, probably I have mistakes

JasminPalumbo

Sep 06, 2015

Read my story?
          
          "Seducer"
          http://w.tt/1LS8IHV
          Thank you!