keylalovered

It is my first history.Can you say if it is good or no?

Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  and one thing more. Be original, you need something that differentiates it from others stories.
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Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  hey!, really the plot it's not bad, but i don't understand what is the point of this history. She found love, and she was raped, and so what? Maybe if you put a little effort, it will go better
          	  
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keylalovered

It is my first history.Can you say if it is good or no?

Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  and one thing more. Be original, you need something that differentiates it from others stories.
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Ale_Mar9R

@ keylalovered  hey!, really the plot it's not bad, but i don't understand what is the point of this history. She found love, and she was raped, and so what? Maybe if you put a little effort, it will go better
            
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keylalovered

I don't write still, but I will start in this weekend but I prefer write in Spanish because I am learning how to do it. If you have any question can you write me. 
          I am learn Sapnish and English, probably I have mistakes