Just a girl looking to share my stories. None yet cause they are all a work in progress. Still stirring ideas. ^^
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littlerockstar44
Oct 14, 2012 03:03PM
@boyhopper69 i think its got a good story line, but t all seems like alot squished into one chapter... maybe you could try pacing it out? I mean all the feelings your character taylor is having happe...View all Conversations