Chelsey Or Chels

@littlerockstar44 ok thank you so much for the input it means the world! I want my book to be great for everyone so thanks! 

@boyhopper69 i think its got a good story line, but t all seems like alot squished into one chapter... maybe you could try pacing it out? I mean all the feelings your character taylor is having happens so fast i am losing track. Maybe just put a little time into the scenes so that its like a couple days instead of just one so people can follow along better?

@littlerockstar44 It's on my page under my works(: it's called No One Waits Forever !

@boyhopper69  sure! :) whats it called?

Hi I was wondering if you could read my story and tell me if I should trash it or keep going! Thanks!(:

@Vanreesespuff hi

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