louie1313

Reworked She’s the Man with new parts out now! 

Hi Louie1313! I’ve finished your latest story, She’s the Man. I’ve reread the last three chapters today. I also read how you were inspired by the 2012 movie Pitch Perfect. That made a huge difference. The characters in your story came to life after looking up the characters’ names. I suggest including these pictures of the actresses you spoke of—just my opinion. I hope you take this story to the end of the school year. I also hope you keep Beca/Broch’s disguise until the very end so you can continue with the disguise for most of the end of your story.

I’ve decided to write a companion piece to Ghostface Corruption! This will be from Tara’s POV. Hope everyone who enjoyed Corruption will give this one a try!