lovemehalways1129

Follow for follow... And please let me know what you think about my story "Missing You"!!!!!
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lovemehalways1129

Thank you for your advice, aha. I'll take everything you said into consideration @wyattlopez
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WyattLopez

It's really intense and the cliff hangers are killing me . I hope that Jess realizes Ryan will probably just stab her in the back...quite literally . Jason seems like a decent guy at least, but if he really loved Jess he wouldn't have put her in that kind of position , obviously she needs an adjustment period from all the crazy stuff that's going on, and purposing to someone you haven't seen or talked to in months  really puts them on the spot. Not to mention, "Surprise!! Marry me!" isn't the best way to do it, J man, You dingus you. Overall it's a really good read . ✍ = 
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lovemehalways1129

Follow for follow... And please let me know what you think about my story "Missing You"!!!!!
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lovemehalways1129

Thank you for your advice, aha. I'll take everything you said into consideration @wyattlopez
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WyattLopez

It's really intense and the cliff hangers are killing me . I hope that Jess realizes Ryan will probably just stab her in the back...quite literally . Jason seems like a decent guy at least, but if he really loved Jess he wouldn't have put her in that kind of position , obviously she needs an adjustment period from all the crazy stuff that's going on, and purposing to someone you haven't seen or talked to in months  really puts them on the spot. Not to mention, "Surprise!! Marry me!" isn't the best way to do it, J man, You dingus you. Overall it's a really good read . ✍ = 
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