@NoobWriter27 @NoobWriter27 Hi, I really enjoyed reading it. I especially liked Bright and Win's interactions, though to be honest I enjoy a sassy Win more. But with his inner thoughts and banter with more than made up for it. I was laughing out loud so much at work I would get weird sstares . That just proves the comedic timing . The tone was also really well conveyed, to me when I read it, I could imagine the narration almost like it was being told to me. The characters did not disappoint either, my baby Fong is sly and I love the nickname given to him. Madam, I can't wait to see more from her and her husband they are so awesome and always teasing their son haha. Not gonna lie though that twist when Win was hurt, I was not expecting that. Boss and Man as always so helpful, though I wish Man had his Type, not gonna lie. Overall it was a fun read, I binged it at work on my downtime, I hope you keep on updating and finish the story. I and I'm sure other patient readers will wait for it. Keep up the awesome writing I want to see where their story ends and how their relationship grows and how they grow closer together. I want to see Win get more comfortable with his man and I like me Bright Vachirawhippped. I look forward to continue reading, thank you author.