NoobWriter27

Hi. Hi! Thank you for the votes on my 2gether with me story. What are your thoughts about it? Sorry the update is delayed (a lot) so many things happened in my life this year ❤️❤️❤️

NoobWriter27

@mar1905a thank u❤️ glad you enjoyed the comedy I wasn't sure if it's funny enough for everyone haha. Man will have his time shine soon also I lowkey wish I had a friend like Fong :-D their friendship is heartwarming. Yeah we all like some Bright Vachirawhipped into our lives :-D ❤️❤️
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mar1905a

@NoobWriter27 @NoobWriter27 Hi, I really enjoyed reading it. I especially liked Bright and Win's interactions, though to be honest I enjoy a sassy Win more. But with his inner thoughts and banter with more than made up for it. I was laughing out loud so much at work I would get weird sstares . That just proves the comedic timing . The tone was also really well conveyed, to me when I read it, I could imagine the narration almost like it was being told to me. The characters did not disappoint either, my baby Fong is sly and I love the nickname given to him. Madam, I can't wait to see more from her and her husband they are so awesome and always teasing their son haha. Not gonna lie though that twist when Win was hurt, I was not expecting that. Boss and Man as always so helpful, though I wish Man had his Type, not gonna lie. Overall it was a fun read, I binged it at work on my downtime, I hope you keep on updating and finish the story. I and I'm sure other patient readers will wait for it. Keep up the awesome writing I want to see where their story ends and how their relationship grows and how they grow closer together. I want to see Win get more comfortable with his man and I like me Bright Vachirawhippped. I look forward to continue reading, thank you author.
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