marjalilli

Hi dear followers,  I just posted the next chapter that continues Cloud's story. Would love to hear your thoughts on it. Always happy to chat about it. Do let me know what you liked and what could be improved. 
          	
          	Have a wonderful weekend, everyone. :)

LauraSlate

Hi! I loved reading your bio and am happy to find another huge fan of George R.R. Martin. I also read the prologue to your book and am excited to read more. Please let me know if you need anything! Keep dreaming big. :)

marjalilli

Hey Laura! Thank you very much for your kind words. :) I am glad you liked it. Do let me know how you like the story. If you see anything that does not flow well / any spelling mistakes or if you have any questions, do let me know. Would appreciate it a lot. Happy to chat! :)
            
            Dreaming big is my favorite hobby!
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marjalilli

Hi dear followers,  I just posted the next chapter that continues Cloud's story. Would love to hear your thoughts on it. Always happy to chat about it. Do let me know what you liked and what could be improved. 
          
          Have a wonderful weekend, everyone. :)

marjalilli

Hi dear followers, Cloud is back and I have just posted the next two chapters. I feel bad about not posting last week as I was traveling. See this as my Easter present to you. Thank you very much for reading. It means a lot. Leave comments if you want me to clarify anything. Have a good weekend, everyone! :)

Darkened_Forests

Your edits are insane / fantastic -- I love how you ask questions -- point specific things out :) Thank you so much for all your help

marjalilli

No worries. You are welcome. I see it more like karma. If I do it properly and with dedication, then others will do the same for me.  Hope you find it useful. Btw the more I comment, the more it means I like it and genuinely care about improving the story.
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MeganHites

You know what's funny? #5 on your about is the entire premise of my poem collection. My truth may differ from the next persons, but everyone has their own side and viewed and something they cling to as the truth. 
          
          Just something I found interesting ;)

marjalilli

 Cool. Will add it to my to-do list.  Same, also busy. Can't wait for the long weekend!
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MeganHites

@marjalilli yep I definitely agree!
            And yes they are posted on here! I have a collection called Truths Secret. 
            
            I've been out of town for awhile and pretty busy so I haven't really updated anything lately.
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marjalilli

That is awesome! Sorry for replying late. This post got lost among all the others we have exchanged. Yes, the truth is never straightforward. That is why I stayed away from just one main character telling the story. I build in many. Some say it is confusing. Life is confusing. Are you posting your poems anywhere?
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WilliamCulbertson

From one passionate fantasy and science fiction fan to another, thanks for the follow.

marjalilli

*so much time
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marjalilli

Indeed, it really seems like a child, cause we invest so much nurturing and developing it. And it is so much fund doing it. I will check out the fantasy series, just because I am in the mood for it currently. I think my next book will be SF. I will make sure to read it then. Thank you very much!
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WilliamCulbertson

@marjalilli  Ah! Not a fair question. Which is my favorite child?
            
            Depends on what you are in the mood for. For fantasy, I'm very proud of my King's series. I've just released the finished versions of the books (the WattPad postings are drafts) in the KIndle store. The first book is "King's Exile."
            
            For science fiction I like the Starship stories with, maybe, "Free Mars" being my choice. I've got a couple–three goofy SF titles too.
            
            Let me know what you think.
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