mensaiesh

Hi everyone my story The Devil Doesn’t Bargain has been completed you can check it out ^^

worstevers

Hello author,
          Just a polite advice.. Not to offend you..
          Your book protagonist became bent... Is it translated form of some other Chinese novel? If it is translated by you can you please in future when translate not do it word to word. It's not needed to translated every word as in every language saying or froming sentence changes like talking to someone doesn't start sentence from same age group as brother/student any many more. Also please give special consideration of name and gender as the names are of the other country as us readers it's already hard to know side characters gender and many times these translations confuse us. You already have million views your story must be good. I was also liking it but the translation takes the soul of the story
          Thank you love here

mensaiesh

Hi friend ^^ Hope you’re well, no no it’s not a translation it’s a BL edited version. It was a BG story (Chinese/Korean) I converted into a BL version. It was my first time doing this kind of experiment but I will try reading and editing again. Thank you ^^
Balas

mensaiesh

Hello everyone! 
          
          First of all, I want to sincerely apologize for being inactive for so long. Some unexpected issues came up, and unfortunately, my account was stuck for a while, which made it difficult for me to log in and continue updating my stories.
          
          The good news is that everything is finally sorted out, and I have my account back! Thank you all so much for your patience, understanding, and for staying with me during this time. It truly means a lot to me.
          
          I know many of you have been waiting for updates, and I appreciate every message, comment, and bit of support you’ve given me. I’ll do my best to be more regular from now on and continue updating the stories as soon as possible.
          
          Thank you again for not giving up on me and for supporting my work. I hope you’ll continue this journey with me. ✨
          
          With love,
          Mensaiesh 
          Ash ^^

mensaiesh

Love you ^^ Yea true, I will try editing BG into BL or GL versions stories, will look into it if I can and then upload it. Do you have any suggestions? ^^
Balas

Purple_elves

@mensaiesh So glad you are back!
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Doliipi

I devoured  protagonist become bent , little while ago and still think about that ending! What a journey for Zhan yu . As a devoted fan of your work, I'd be genuinely honored to beta read for any future projects, including the sequel(if you are planning to cus some of us are expecting ) . I'd love to help you nail that next stop arc!

mensaiesh

Thank you so much ^^ yes yes sure. 
Balas

Lone__Moon

Hello author.... I love your story the protagonist became bent and fall for the villein. I read it more than once (and scolded people who scolded the ml cause i love him too much) 
          
          Well i wanted to read the straight version of the story too. I lost the title that i saved so I'd be grateful if you shared it in the reply. 

mensaiesh

@Lone__Moon Hi Friend I remember the original name it’s - Avoid the protagonist.
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mensaiesh

Hi my friend ^^ my apologies I don’t quite remember the name currently because it’s been a long while now. If I remember I will message you ^^ thank you for understanding. 
Balas

sadiemorgan961

I was reading Devil Doesn’t Bargain and the scene where Raviel corners Cillian in the alcove the red string burning while Kael interrupts with his teasing it was such a perfect mix of tension and dark comedy. Do you think Kael is just comic relief here or could his mischief actually shift the balance between Cillian and Raviel later on?

mensaiesh

Hi ^^ you can read and check it out friend ^^ now the story is completed. Hope you enjoy it ✌🏻🥰🍀
Balas