|the zen zone|

Hi, are you still doing critiques? If not, I can most likely help you out with things to get a move on! I’m known as the editor in my Newspaper group. 

I just published a new chapter of my book. It’s not perfect (obviously) but be sure to check it out! 
          https://my.w.tt/bjpmufjoVM

Hey guys! I hope that you’re enjoying the critiques I’m giving you all, and I hope that more people continue to apply! 
          
          Please be sure to check out my horrible story and leave a critique of your own haha. It’s in need of HEAVY editing. 
          
          My personal account is @nataliehearts !