niks_560

Thank you so much. I thought my writing was good, but not THAT good! Ah you make me blush, which unlike Nina, doesn't happen very often lol. 
          
          As for the sexual tension, yes I know, I'm cruel!!! But like you said, it makes it better, unlike other stories where they don't even know each other and the end up in bed together. I want to draw it out because, although they are married, they are still getting to know each other, so why would they even give in to the tension? I've got lots of people saying 'make them kiss'. Again, people, they don't know each other, so why would they? It goes against everything Nina is! 
          
          My little rant is now over, so again, thank you! I just write how I see it, so I'm glad you like it. I still need to write the next chapter, but it will be here soon. 
          
          X

nenyalorien

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            nenyalorien
            Aug 14, 2010
            
            Hey Niks! Thanks for being nice and leaving me a comment back. :) Was just done with another person's story and I must say, while I thoroughly enjoyed the other story's concept and the lightness of it, it does not come close to your skill with words. There's just something more skillful with the way you weave your images. :) There's also something very skilled with the way you draw out the sexual tension between your characters and yet not allow them to consummate that tension... AND YET not bore us, your readers, to oblivion. I was pretty happy just watching the tension and not caring if they end up in bed or not. In fact, I think I prefer it better that way. Since you've achieved that, it means you're pretty damn good!
            
            It reminds me of a few other stories I've read, that those stories really do stand out because of the gift and the skill. 
            
            As for me putting in my suggestions... I think I'd rather not. See, I prefer beholding art, not directing the artist's hand. LOL.
            
            And yeah, I'm intrigued about newhope's writing too, though I'm avoiding getting in too deep here in Wattpad coz this may be my next addiction, aside from Facebook games. LOL. :)
            
            See you around, Niks!
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niks_560

Okay, firstly thanks for becoming a fan. I hope you check out my other stories too, especially the one titled 'A WORK OF FICTION'. i have a feeling that you will like it. 
          
          The more that I think about it, Alec and Nina do kind of remind me of Heath and Julia from 10 Things I Hate About You (an all time classic in my opinion). Especially Heath as Alec. The bad boy with a good heart. 
          
          There will be more soon, trust me. I have tons of ideas that are just waiting for me to put pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard lol). I'm glad you think it's worth publishing, although I don't know if it is. I just write for fun really, and this idea just popped into my head one day and I've been taking it to whereever it has lead me. 
          
          So glad you love it, and have taken the time to leave me a massive comment. Trust me, they make my day and always make me smile. I have one fan who leaves me killer comments. You can check them out at the bottom tof the story page, especially the most recent one, where I share a few future ideas with her. 
          
          If you have any ideas or just want to talk more about the story, please just leave a message. They always make me happy (really long ones do). 
          
          That's all for now. Stay tuned for more X

nenyalorien

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            nenyalorien
            Aug 14, 2010
            
             Hi! "We Got Drunk, Woke Up In A Motel Room.....Married! And This Doesn't Bother You!?" was the first story from a Wattpad author that I've read. Because of all the werewolves and vampire stories on here, I've avoided reading anything that wasn't from a published author. Till this story caught my eye last night. It was so riveting that I have to say this: this is the first work of fiction that I've read in years. This has been the one reason why I finally logged in to Wattpad once again, and the reason why I actually fixed up my profile. Lol. 
            
            This was an amazing read. I only regret that it left off at Suze and her papers. Please upload more! Keep going! I'm praying and hoping that you could send this off to a publisher soon. :) 
            
            This is nice, lighthearted stuff, the kind I wish I read back in my teens. :)
            
            Also, I keep imagining Alec and Nina as the characters in 10 Things I hate About You, Heath Ledger and Julia Stiles. :)
            
            Keep sending us your great stuff! 
            
            nenyalorien
            Aug 14, 2010
            
            And oh yeah. I started last night; fell asleep. Woke up and saw it still on my computer, finished reading it in about an hour. Good stuff! :D
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