nyxandshit
It’s nice to see you put out something new! I’ve always enjoyed the level of detail you put into your worlds
nightshade971
nyxandshit
Your story really is intriguing. So much detail and thought behind it. I look forward to more chapters!
nightshade971
Guys if ur following me it would be super awesome if you read my latest chapter, and if you like it give it a vote or leave me a comment about what you liked or what you didn't like or if you think i should include a love triangle or any other polygon doesn't always have to be a triangle
Lots of love stay safe
JoystickJammer
Hey there!!! :)
JoystickJammer
@JoystickJammer sure, good luck! I'll be around a couple of chapters later. If you have the time or are into fics, check out my work too. I'm looking for feedback anyway!! :)
nightshade971
@JoystickJammer thats great if things go acording to plan i should have another chapter up on Monday
nyxandshit
Hey, so first off, you’ve been my biggest supporter, and I want to say how much I appreciate you! I read your work, and I think you’ve really got something if you keep at it. I was really impressed with your worldbuilding and level of backstory. Ok... I also have a selfish reason for messaging you... Do you recall if I ever mentioned what season it was in my book? For the life of me, I can’t recall, and I know I hate those inconsistencies when I come across them in others’ work. Thanks so much, and I hope to keep seeing you on my page!
nyxandshit
Hmm, those are excellent points lol, now I’m definitely going to have to make it spring/summer. I’m almost done the next chapter, and I’ve laid out a basic plan of what I’d like to happen (we all know it doesn’t always turn out that way) so I should be able to pick up the pace. And thank you so much! I think character depth is sooo important. Every character, no matter their role, should be considered the main character of their own story and written that way.
nightshade971
@PoolsofInk first off THANKS SO MUCH!!! I am always so happy when i get genuine opinions on my writing. I love your story so much and all the characters are so complex and awesome. I really wanna hug them and make everything better. I do have to say the suspense is killing me, i need more (i understand that you probably have a life and i dont want you to stress or rush) as with the season i dont think you mentioned it. I assumed that it was spring or early summer. She does wear skimpy clothes and hasnt complained about it being too hot or too cold. Also if she doesn't have electricity in her appartment she wouldn't have any heat or air conditioning. Hope that helps keep up with the good work