paulmitting

It's a short chapter for Runtime Error this time. David manages to free Matron King but their escape hits some snags! Please have a read and let me know what you think of it.

Mister-M137

Also one of the things Ayla hates is being alone, she even admits to herself and when she nearly lost Kuroko she felt so much fear...and anger to misska, but after Kuroko left and Hearing Misaka stalled not just because of some issues but because she wanted to feel superior so she stalled to long which makes Ayla blame her, Ayla isolates herself out of despair, and to her Formor close friends but especially Misaka the most she's bitter and hostile since she blames Misaka for this situation she's in.

Mister-M137

https://archiveofourown.org/works/57569059
          
          Made a new chapter, this was really short, but?......chance you can answer Uiharu question in the end?

Mister-M137

@paulmitting yes, and even though Uiharu  is one of the people who came up with the plan at the time back then quieted being Kuroko partner before after the disaster later on...forgot her sisters graduation along with Saten, and while she didn't vote for Kuroko to get a second chance(before the graduation day ) and only did so Because of Saten if they remain friends with her or not or try to be, even admiting she does not not know of there friendship could recover and for the time threatened to cease all contact with her if she talked about Misaka near them at the time after that disaster. Ayla? While angry at Uiharu? It's very less so then her anger with Misaka Does acknowledge both that's her actions where less heinous then Misaka's to her sister and not overkill as the Railgun's actions to her sister and she can get Uiharu anger at the time.
            
            Also? What you think when Ayla said this to Uiharu in the chapter? And Ayla reminded them of what they did over three years ago.
            
            “Wha—what!? Seriously? You decided to trick us into thinking Misaka was going to meet someone dangerous? How could you do something like that!? To your friends!?” Uiharu stammered, her indignation palpable, her voice shaking slightly with disbelief.
            
            Ayla's smile widened as she closed her eyes, folding her arms behind her back like a cat basking in the sun. “The same way you all tricked my sister with Konori Mii, leading her to believe she was meeting someone for a serious job, only to end up with electric cuffs on her which led to a situation That hurt my sister, both emotionally and physically.”
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Nice brief chapter. Good to see Ayla is mending some bridges in her relationships with Uiharu and Saten.
            I think Ayla has always considered them her friends, even when they hurt her and Kuroko. Those actions weren't out of malice but by a misguided attempt to resolve things between they all cared about.
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Mister-M137

https://archiveofourown.org/works/57569059
          
          Made a new chapter, now there's a question at the end....
          
          Also this chapter is a emotional one

paulmitting

@Mister-M137 I imagine Misaka finds it to be a kind of justified punishment for her sins against Kuroko. Having Ayla there reminds her of Kuroko but is not her, which allows her to suffer and not impact Kuroko directly. Kind of messed up logic but Misaka excels at that!
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Mister-M137

Yes, and what your think that Misaka unlike with Kuroko when Misaka crawled into herself and kept Kuroko away from her? Did whatever she could to do so, even told her sisters not to tell Kuroko a thing on her and her status....she did everything for a while to keep Kuroko away from her and not hear a thing about her.
            
            Does not do the same to Ayla after Kuroko left? Easily could even and both girls are aware of this.
            
            Why do you Misaka not do the same to Ayla after Kuroko left? And let's Ayla....do what she can to her? Is it because of past friendship or would it be because if she did it remind her so much what she did to Kuroko?
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Misaka is obviously pretty broken at this point. having lost all of the drive and self-confidence she used to possess. I think she is past the point of being able to fight back against anything since she recognizes how badly she messed up her relationship with Kuroko.
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paulmitting

Chapter 17 is now available for Runtime Error. David finds out more about the plans of Rachel MacPhee and Bo Sung-Tae, as well as learning how Matron King came to the Undercity and founded the Burrow. Have a read and let me know what you think of the story so far.

Mister-M137

https://archiveofourown.org/works/57569059
          
          New chapter this one's between index and Misaka and a sad talk.

Mister-M137

@paulmitting so in the chapter what you think on why Misaka let's Ayla do what she does to her in her talk with index? 
            
            And what you think of how Misaka described Ayla to index...how she's basically to her a painful reminder what she didn't try to hold onto.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Just read the chapter now and I think it is one of your best yet! Great work my friend.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 I'll check it out tonight.
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