paulmitting

I wish everyone a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. If you don't celebrate those events, then just insert whichever holiday you feel is appropriate!

Mister-M137

You ok.

paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Yeah, sorry but I haven't been on Wattpad for some time. Too busy playing around with my new 3D printer - barely even written anything or updated my online accounts. I'll try and check in more often!
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Mister-M137

Hey in Madtad1 original story future bright where I based mine off of I found out how old the characters where....and Ayla now be more angry then she originally was...
          
          At the beginning, Kuroko was 13.
          
          But when Kuroko came back when she decided to leave and was gone for a year and a half she was 23....
          
          
          Meaning......It took Misaka basically 8 years and the last touch Frenda dying to realize her mistake and that she was the abuser not Shirai....
          
          But mostly Frenda dying.....
          
          So it was not two years it was 8....
          
          So does Ayla actually now have more of a reason to be pissed?

Mister-M137

@paulmitting oh good to know.
            
            So think Madtad1 will post stories this year?
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Eight years is a long time to realise that. Ayla has always had lots of reasons to be pissed with Misaka - enduring it over such a duration makes it doubly hard to bear. PS: I haven't been checking Wattpad much lately but I'll try and look more often in the new year.
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Mister-M137

New chapter., so what you think?
          
          https://archiveofourown.org/works/57569059

Mister-M137

Ok, also what you think when Ayla pointed out to Misaka on it made sense that she was for now suspended from her project.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Looks good. I left a comment there. I did notice you kind of repeated one part: Misaka swallowed hard, the weight of Ayla’s sharp observation pressing against her chest like a physical force. She wanted to argue, to deflect, to insist that she was doing the right thing.
            And then: Misaka swallowed hard, the weight of Ayla’s sharp observation pressing against her chest like a physical force. She wanted to argue, to deflect, to insist that she was doing the right thing—but the words refused to come. They piled up uselessly in her throat, heavy and unformed.
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Mister-M137

In your opinion....what you think it would take for Ayla to ..
          
          Forgive Misaka.

Mister-M137

@paulmitting yeah Ayla makes it deadly clear that they don't have much ground to stand on.....
            
            Ayla also makes it clear that Misaka never really stops her or tells her to stop whenever they talk.... Pointing out how Misaka is basically doing that to punish herself....and Ayla makes it also clear to Misaka....That just because she's allowing her to be angry with her and say what she wants to her.....that this will never undo anything she did with Kuroko or Atone....not even close.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 It is all a kind of stalking, especially asking some to use tracking via a device!
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting yeah, also While Ayla is in a way stalking Misaka when she comes to talk to her....
            
            As Ayla points out. "My sister wants to be alone, with the sister she went on the trip with ..and your Texting my sister even though her phone is off, and have Uiharu trying to track her location...so you have no grounds to call me out for stalking when your doing it as much as me if not more."
            
            Since it Ayla right that what Misaka doing is a form of stalking herself? And also even having Uiharu try to track Kuroko by her device.
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