paulmitting

Hello again! It's been a while but I have been writing my first Werewolf Romance and it is now published in full on Wattpad. Please check out 'Not Another Werewolf Romance' and let me know what you think of it.

Mister-M137

In your opinion....what you think it would take for Ayla to ..
          
          Forgive Misaka.

Mister-M137

@paulmitting yeah Ayla makes it deadly clear that they don't have much ground to stand on.....
            
            Ayla also makes it clear that Misaka never really stops her or tells her to stop whenever they talk.... Pointing out how Misaka is basically doing that to punish herself....and Ayla makes it also clear to Misaka....That just because she's allowing her to be angry with her and say what she wants to her.....that this will never undo anything she did with Kuroko or Atone....not even close.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 It is all a kind of stalking, especially asking some to use tracking via a device!
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting yeah, also While Ayla is in a way stalking Misaka when she comes to talk to her....
            
            As Ayla points out. "My sister wants to be alone, with the sister she went on the trip with ..and your Texting my sister even though her phone is off, and have Uiharu trying to track her location...so you have no grounds to call me out for stalking when your doing it as much as me if not more."
            
            Since it Ayla right that what Misaka doing is a form of stalking herself? And also even having Uiharu try to track Kuroko by her device.
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Mister-M137

Mister-M137

Yup! I wanted to show she has some other stuff she does......
            
            Also, reason why Ayla Does not accapt Misaka apology even when she does apologize....is this reason...
            
            "sorry" starts to lose any meaning if she's going to continue making the same reckless choices and not learning a damn thing about it.
            
            Which in a way Ayla is right, since Misaka has made the same mistakes in a way multiple times with her sister Kuroko, and even when Kuroko did save hers and Imouto life while not meaning to did make the same mistake again causing kuroko to leave and only called for help at the last moment from everyone when she heard Kuroko was leaving.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137  Just read the latest chapter. Here is what I wrote as a comment: What a simple, joyful chapter. It is perfect at showing Ayla has a human side that needs release, to feel some sense of accomplishment. Love it!
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting again...I really hate the massive cliffhanger.
            
            And hope you enjoy my Chapter.
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Mister-M137

Also another reason why Ayla is so angry still...and can't let go of her anger towards Misaka.
          
          And there's the fact of That the Misaka clones don't physically age.
          
          Meaning that Kuroko relashionship with The Misaka clone would make Kuroko look like a pedaphile when Kuroko reaches adulthood and the fact there's the chance that the clone like the other sisters have a shorten lifespan
          
          So Ayla angry at Misaka for two things.
          
          1: Her sister basically looking like a pedaphile, and people outside of academy city don't know this about the clone situation.
          
          2: the chance if her sister and the clone do get together....the clone dies sooner or later and her sister may kill herself.

Mister-M137

@paulmitting still, does Ayla have every right to be pissed off by that fact that Her sister may be mistaken for a pedaphile and the chance her sister will have a potential third heartbreak when the Misaka clone with her potentially dies.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Being in a relationship with a person who remained effectively a child in appearance would be a tough situation. I actually had one of my main characters have to face that in the 'Eric and the Quantum Dragon' story. He will look like a 13 year old boy for all of his possibly long life. Kuroko wouldn't kill herself if her clone partner died - I don't think that is a part of the real Kuroko personality - but she would be devastated.
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Mister-M137

Also, On Ayla Shriai her relashionship sheet.
          
          1: Kuroko Shriai: Ayla is friendly and kind towards her Little Twin Sister, and is very loyal to her and protective for her well being as she was with her after her falling out with Misaka, and is not afraid to call out people who harmed her sister emotionally of physically, only holds back because her sister ask her to, Kuroko also trusts her sister as well, and like with Misaki talks to her sister about her heartbreak.
          
          2: Mikoto Misaka: Ayla used to have high respect to Misaka, but whatever respect Ayla has for Misaka is gone after how Misaka threatened her sister in the past and if she had any respect left its probably for sure gone after she heard that Misaka Stalled making her sister wait for her answer, ayla is brutal with pointing out her flaws and how she caused her own hell....But she may have some care for her, as while she was angry at Misaka? She was horrified by Misaka Pycotic break and seeing Frenda die and nearly losing her sister.
          
          3: Uiharu; Ayla is not as close to Uiharu as before, but she's not hostile to her either, she's mostly neutral with her, but part of her wished she and her can be friends again.
          
          4: Saten: Ayla is more friendly genuinely with Saten, and more patient with her and lenient, this is because Saten did give her sister a second chance and also more then likely stopped Frenda from killing Kuroko, Because of that Ayla is friendly to Saten and out of respect is friendly to Saten girlfriend Uiharu even if she has some issues with Uiharu.
          
          5: Frenda: Ayla utterly and completely despises Frenda knowing of her dark deeds and that she does kill, but even though Ayla didn't like her and bordelined hated her and saw her as a threat and danger? She was horrified at her death.
          
          6: Imouto: Ayla Is annoyed by Imouto, and like with Misaka is not afraid to call the Misaka sister out on her actions, and the feeling is mutual as Imouto Is annoyed how Ayla hurts her sister.
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          So what you think?

Mister-M137

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Also? While Ayla is very very Royally pissed with Misaka? She's just this.
          1: proffesolism with her during there meetings while she's cold to her, She does not taunt Misaka with her mistakes.
          2: she mostly leaves misaka alone when off hrs.
          3: only time she openly taunted Misaka and called her out on her mistakes......Was when Misaka tried to get her attention to apologize...By revealing she knows Ayla knows while she didn't say yes to Frenda kill offer she didn't say no either....Which Ayla exploded at her for.
          
          Basically? Ayla while furious? Pragmaticly knows she does not need to rub salt into Misaka wounds, Misaka already fucked herself over massively, she does not need to destroy her....she already destroyed herself and has a lot of regrets for what she did and didn't do and what she thinks she did.
          
          Only reason Ayla took the job of parole officer is because she knows her sister would not want Misaka to rot in a cell...and the state Misaka is in if she got a criminal record and gets banned from the project she's working on for her sisters while being a doctor..... Because of the action? She nore then likely would have killed herself.

paulmitting

That's it! Runtime Error has had the last chapter - Number 24 - published and for now it is done! We find out what happened to David after he watched what he thought was his first and final sunrise with Nino. I hope my readers have enjoyed this tale and I'll be putting out more work soon. Thanks for reading, Paul.

paulmitting

I just published Chapter 23 for Runtime Error. This is a chapter where David makes his goodbyes to the people he has met and cared for in his brief time as a self-aware mechanical. There will be one last chapter after this and then I reckon his story is done.