paulmitting

Apologies for being so quiet on the platform! I've been obsessed with my 3D printer but just lately it has become kind of linked to my storytelling. I have been using it to create printed versions of some of my characters like Luisa Alvarez and Millie Hargreaves. They aren't perfect but it has been fun trying to make scale versions of some of my favorites. Once I get them painted I'll try and work out how to put some pics online. All the best, Paul.

Lord-Commander32

https://archiveofourown.org/works/57569059/chapters/216078451
          
          Made a new chapter hope you leave a comment and can't wait to see your comment.

paulmitting

@Lord-Commander32 I will check it out tonight and let you know.
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paulmitting

Apologies for being so quiet on the platform! I've been obsessed with my 3D printer but just lately it has become kind of linked to my storytelling. I have been using it to create printed versions of some of my characters like Luisa Alvarez and Millie Hargreaves. They aren't perfect but it has been fun trying to make scale versions of some of my favorites. Once I get them painted I'll try and work out how to put some pics online. All the best, Paul.

Lord-Commander32

You ok.

paulmitting

@Mister-M137 I'll look at publishing the 13 chapters I have so far really soon. I suspect we'll be waiting even longer for Madtad to add a new chapter to his tale though.
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Lord-Commander32

@paulmitting ok so will you let me know whenever your new story comes out?
            
            Also, I really am hoping to see the next chapter of Madtad1 works, I mean I want to see what happens next and he left us on a cliffhanger for 10 months, and when it was Christmas he left a note, but still her taking a while and it was 3 months since then...
            
            I just want to see what happens next and know what happens to Misaka after thy bomb went off, it really is painful to wait...
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Yeah, I haven't been looking at Wattpad much lately. Even my writing has suffered for some months now as my printing obsession has taken hold! I'll load my current story - what I have finished so far - onto Wattpad soon. It's another one set in my Zone world.
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Lord-Commander32

Hey in Madtad1 original story future bright where I based mine off of I found out how old the characters where....and Ayla now be more angry then she originally was...
          
          At the beginning, Kuroko was 13.
          
          But when Kuroko came back when she decided to leave and was gone for a year and a half she was 23....
          
          
          Meaning......It took Misaka basically 8 years and the last touch Frenda dying to realize her mistake and that she was the abuser not Shirai....
          
          But mostly Frenda dying.....
          
          So it was not two years it was 8....
          
          So does Ayla actually now have more of a reason to be pissed?

Lord-Commander32

@paulmitting oh good to know.
            
            So think Madtad1 will post stories this year?
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Eight years is a long time to realise that. Ayla has always had lots of reasons to be pissed with Misaka - enduring it over such a duration makes it doubly hard to bear. PS: I haven't been checking Wattpad much lately but I'll try and look more often in the new year.
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Lord-Commander32

New chapter., so what you think?
          
          https://archiveofourown.org/works/57569059

Lord-Commander32

Ok, also what you think when Ayla pointed out to Misaka on it made sense that she was for now suspended from her project.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Looks good. I left a comment there. I did notice you kind of repeated one part: Misaka swallowed hard, the weight of Ayla’s sharp observation pressing against her chest like a physical force. She wanted to argue, to deflect, to insist that she was doing the right thing.
            And then: Misaka swallowed hard, the weight of Ayla’s sharp observation pressing against her chest like a physical force. She wanted to argue, to deflect, to insist that she was doing the right thing—but the words refused to come. They piled up uselessly in her throat, heavy and unformed.
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