paulmitting

I hope everyone has a great New Years Eve. Act responsibly and get home safely!
          	Alternatively, go as crazy as you like and see where you end up. The choice is yours.

paulmitting

So when I said I was finished with writing Angelina and the Iron Witch, it turns out I was a liar. Over the Xmas break another chapter made itself known to me, demanding that I write it down and get it published. It's called Unfinished Business and I hope my readers like it.

paulmitting

Thanks for reading it!
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting I enjoyed it! I really was entertained by that.
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Mister-M137

Also, just asking? In your opinion? Besides her sister Kuroko? What do you think would it take for Ayla to forgive Misaka? And also finally let go of her anger to Misaka and long hurt?

paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Happy New Year to you too!
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 Yeah, that makes sense. People can be dominant in one relationship and subservient in another - it all depends on the individuals and the dynamic between them. Ayla could be Asexual and just as likely she hasn't found the right person to trigger strong romantic feelings. Either is possible and these days people are too quick to try and label themselves as one thing or another. Real human beings evolve and change as they experience more in life and tying yourself to a label can deny future opportunities.
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting also happy new years!
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Mister-M137

Also? For my story? On Ayla? I mostly made this story based on Madtad1 story as you know with a few changes biggest being If Shriai had a sister in this Sinario who was with her through the whole thing.
          
          But? Ayla is made to be a contrast to her sister, Who has many reasons to love Misaka, Ayla in contrast after events on what Misaka did and to her sister? And what she didn't do Has every reason to Dislike, be angry and distrust Misaka.
          
          Basically? Ayla is what if Kuroko Never loved Misaka that way, got reasons to look down on Misaka and have a deep anger to Misaka.
          
          Basically? Replace Misaka and Kuroko happy dymantic, and Reverse Misaka and Kuroko dymantic when they where not on good terms with Ayla being a justified angry like Kuroko and a now Broken and sad Misaka dymantic...and Misaka does nothing to defend herself or argue back.
          
          And what makes this more painful for Misaka? Is that Ayla looks exactly like Kuroko and sounds like her.
          
          So would you say this makes it more painful for Misaka?

Mister-M137

@paulmitting also? Ayla is so angry and Hurt, that she can't even say Misaka Mikoto name, She....Just calls her Railgun Everytime they talk.....
            
            What does that say that Ayla just called Misaka Railgun now? If they talk to each other? Because of her anger and hurt that she now can't physically call Misaka Mikoto by her name.
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting and Misaka always knows while Ayla looks like Kuroko and sounds like her...she knows it's not Kuroko...but to her...she's probably the closest thing she has to Kuroko, even if it hurts on what Ayla says to her.
            
            Also happy holidays.
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Mister-M137

Not to mention her voice sounds Like Kuroko to as well.
            
            And what's worse, Misaka Views that she earned this anger and contempt from Ayla
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paulmitting

I just published Chapter 14 of David's tale. He recounts how they made their way back to Deep Below and began planning the best way to protect their town. Please check it out let me know what you think of it. Paul.

paulmitting

Thanks.
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Mister-M137

@paulmitting I read it not bad.
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Mister-M137

Also question? What do you think that When someone does call out Misaka, Uiharu and Imouto out on there actions? They can't even make a proper defence or argument on there actions.
          
          Unlike Shirai? Ayla is not the type to let emotions get in the way on when she thinks things through and brings cold facts to them, and Misaka is over the years used to people basically being sympathetic with her, or her herself thinking badly of herself.
          
          But when Someone calls her out and the others out on it, it hurts way more from Ayla for Misaka then Misaka calling herself out.
          
          Why do you think that is?

Mister-M137

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Yes, but Ayla makes sure when someone really fucked up And hurts someone she cares about deeply....
            
            She twists the knife..with words of course! To scar it in without mercy how much you screwed up.
            
            Like she does with Misaka in the story.
            
            Also another reason Ayla is furious with Misaka....is that she seems she does not want to try, even if Misaka feeling bad she just does the same thing after Shirai left which pisses her off to no ends.
            
            Also while harsh with Misaka, and cold to her...
            
            Does Ayla have a point that Misaka braught her own misery on herself? Since even when Ayla is not calling her out Misaka is miserable a lot since Shirai Left.
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paulmitting

@Mister-M137 It is common for people to second-guess and doubt themselves, for they know all the awful things they think about in the privacy of their own thoughts. It is why it is common to refer to someone like that as "their own worst enemy". However, when someone else points out your failings/bad behaviour, especially somone you know and care about, that cuts deep. It forces us to acknowledge we really have messed up when someone that close to us calls us out.
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