rivanya__riv

Should I write a political ff??

AliIbrahimi6

hi, is it possible for you to write some thing on Arshi ..its just request if possible the top is....about a story on Arshi with this consent ..what if khushi had not ready to accept his past lifestyle or affairs relationships (if fake or name sake not really involve in such thing then make him prove it)?  how both of them expressed regret for his past, non-committal lifestyle itself or for not being a virgin for her (if he was involve love to see him virgin and only truly one woman man of khushi) , plus focus their current love, trust issues, and emotional pain caused by misunderstandings plus specifics of his past relationships. .....
          
          Story to stat from :
          1. story start from Diwali night when he announce enegement with lavanay after almost kiss and later realized his blunder and wanted khushi in his life. 
          2. story start from her falling from cliff in possess of saving  him as her responsibility of wife or correct the  mistake she made if proving her innocent and fall in trap of shyam and made arnav sign paper on shyam request thread to help her.
          3. story start from him calling her biggest mistake of his life and opening all her old wounds which she ignored or wanted to forget as she to love Arnav but now his own behavior and not ready to forgive her only mistake of hiding shaym truth and continuing balm causing and point finger on other character target her to  reject him 
          4. Please if possible show him and his past color lifestyle real or fake ..he to need to prove himself as virgin and all relationship he had were name sake or in friendly zone only and he never involve in any physical ..as its easy to point on others charter but hard when it happened to you…so he may also realized his accusation pain depth of her hurt of his Poisons word he so easily without thinking throw on khushi so causally where iso hard to handle and never be easily for girl like khushi show his redemption and wooing khushi back …

AliIbrahimi6

Way to write plot:
            1. Prolonged Conflict and Drama: The creators would likely have introduced a major storyline where Khushi's traditional values clashed with the reality of Arnav's past. This would have led to more episodes dedicated to their arguments, emotional distance, and a need for further reconciliation.
            2. Arnav's Deeper Redemption Arc: Arnav would have had to do more than just fall in love and get married. He would have needed to explicitly apologize or demonstrate profound regret for his past in a way that the actual show never required of him. He might have needed to make significant sacrifices or gestures to prove his current devotion to her purity and values.
            3. Khushi's Moral Struggle: The narrative would focus heavily on Khushi's internal struggle with her family's values, her love for Arnav, and her ability to forgive and move past his history.
            4. Potential Separation (Temporary): The conflict might have been severe enough to cause a temporary separation, where Khushi leaves the house or refuses to fully commit to the marriage until she achieved peace with the situation.
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AliIbrahimi6

hi , please if possible will you resume the story of yours.....thank you
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/365995477-arshi-dil-sambhal-ja-zara-phir-mohabbat-karne

AliIbrahimi6

thanks a lot for accepting the request  ...will waiting to read the story ...hope to get  your post ...please remember to link the post so I will not miss it ...thanks again ...
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rivanya__riv

@AliIbrahimi6   I'm trying to read it again so that I can write with the same flow, has been long
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AliIbrahimi6

please if possible can you write similar to this topic ...the story "Arshi TS: Mann Bharraya" was left  in middle since AUG 2020 and never get any respond Sat, May 18, 2019, can you write similar something.....please love to read more excellent writing skill...
          if possible please help love to read who arnav will handle and woo khushi and also teach sheetal lesson and him and his family realized their mistake and taking granted khsuhi every time ...love to see arenas struggle to woo khsuhi .....and know the whole story of you can write something or continue to complete it...will appreciate it please.... thank you
          
          I KNOW ITS NTO YOUR STORY PLEASE TRY TO WRITE SIMILAR OR RESUME IF POSSIBLE HTEY STOP IT LONG AGAO AND NEVER RESUME IT OR RESPOND TO ANY REWUEST ....WAITING DESPERTALY TO READ THE FULL STORY
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/231217474-arshi-ts-mann-bharraya