JamieSweet_1
Thank you for following! I hope you enjoy reading or skimming through my novels; The Luna Aldridge Series.
robbengerbero
_itha_18
Hey, can u give my book a try
https://www.wattpad.com/story/407093175?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=_itha_18
magicletters57
I am going to help you. I was once like you, but unfortunately there was no one to guide me. We both are going to have roles to play in the journey. Do you type your story using a laptop/PC or using a phone?
magicletters57
@robbengerbero, it's a good start. You need to improve on the repetition aspect, for example, you used the word 'then' repeatedly throughout, which has made the book boring. Venture into vivid descriptions, do more research on grammar spices like similes and improve your grammar. A successful book is never the first draft; for example, I rewrite my books 3 times to make them perfect. Keep on trying; the best authors kept trying even when their first draft was bad.
robbengerbero
@magicletters57 hi I use my phone to do my book but I use yes right thanks for your help and I just want to ask what do you think of the book
robbengerbero
Hi guys book is back up go and check it out
robbengerbero
Sorry guy I will be talking all my book off
Shaky_Alexa
Thankyou so much for following me..✨❤
