robbengerbero

Thanks to everyone how has followed me

Igreat2

Can you send me the link?

robbengerbero

@Igreat2 hi can I ask you for help with a book that I want to make
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robbengerbero

@Igreat2 I will but it is not up yet you will be the first one to get it
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emmanuelwrites57

I am going to help you. I was once like you, but unfortunately there was no one to guide me. We both are going to have roles to play in the journey. Do you type your story using a laptop/PC or using a phone?

robbengerbero

@magicletters57  okay thanks will do that
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emmanuelwrites57

@robbengerbero, it's a good start. You need to improve on the repetition aspect, for example, you used the word 'then' repeatedly throughout, which has made the book boring. Venture into vivid descriptions, do more research on grammar spices like similes and improve your grammar. A successful book is never the first draft; for example, I rewrite my books 3 times to make them perfect. Keep on trying; the best authors kept trying even when their first draft was bad.
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robbengerbero

@magicletters57  hi I use my phone to do my book but I use yes right thanks for your help and I just want to ask what do you think of the book
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