Flowingriver0000

Hlo, I know it's not my place to comment on your ideas but I am feeling restless without doing it. I want to give my views on your book "affair with a married man". First, the female lead feels guilty of betraying her friend then she keeps the affair for 3 years and then after her husband dies she reconciles with Male lead like everything good only happens to her after doing such things. Then, make lead treats her wife as an option and do not care about her. These are my opinions but you have have shown great power by publishing this story knowing it will get negative reviews more. I only want to suggest you that if you can write story on Lexi's point of view like how she felt after the betrayal and how she overcomes it. I know you will write brilliantly. Please don't take me wrong and if you can reply then pleaseeeeeeeee do it.@sasshole77

Flowingriver0000

@Flowingriver0000 just my view of the book.
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NoXiOuS_PsYcHe

@Flowingriver0000 you are giving spoilers girl ;-;
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AyanRoy226

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Hey bitch
          Do u know how retarded u are?
          U r such a big fucktard
          U r DISGUSTING,Pathetic,Characterless and a dick lover
          U r soooo horny dat  u don't care if you are going to have a STD
          U are a mistress of a married man who is 20 yrs older than U????YOU are a criminal u bitch needs to go to he'll
          I HOPE your love of your life will spend a very happy 3 yrs with you making you love him more and then he will marry you and will cheat on you for 5 yrs
          U will know about his infedility after 3 yrs but he will not give a damn about you
          He will abandon you and also kill your baby so that u 'll no more be able to become a mother 
          And then it will be fun to see your life getting shattered piece by piece
          Bcz u deserve it bitch

Nicole-writes

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@AyanRoy226 Quit being negative Bitch! I love that story and how dare you say such bad words to an author? First, you got too personal on a story you didn't write. You don't even have a story in your library and you had the guts to call her a bitch? Well, you are the bitch here because she didn't write the story for people like you and I love your rants. Keep doing it! Just don't come near me or I'll give you what exactly you deserve. 
            
            We shouldn't bring these author's down. They took their time to write these interesting stories, we should always support them and I'll be sure to report your account because you're a bully!!! 
            
            I'm against people like you. Fuck off Bitch!!!! 
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sasshole77

Yeah bud lol. Thanks for the feedback on a FICTIONAL story you’re awful angry about a made up story a bored 17 year old wrote 
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KaysonMire

@southernpride1998 Guess who finally got the prologue fixed up and published??
          Just so you know. By the way, what story of yours should I start next? They all look so good!

KaysonMire

Awesome! :)
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sasshole77

@KaysonMire I will read it! And Affair with a married man is the one I'm mainly working on right now. 
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KaysonMire

I knew there was something I was missing...
          What is the inspiration for the casting list? How do you base who your MC should be? 

KaysonMire

@southernpride1998 I'm just thankful that I'm at least a pen and paper writer.. it makes things slightly easier, until it comes to transferring it onto a computer.
            I will be posting the prologue here real shortly, you'll have to tell me what you think!
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sasshole77

@KaysonMire yeah, that's what my issue is. I'm trying to balance home, school, and writing and its taking a tol on my updates. but im looking forward to reading yours!
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