Inkpen_Scroll

Hi, I was wondering if you could check out my Red Queen FanFiction? I've read yours and I really enjoyed it, so I was hoping for some advice.
          Thanks,
          - Inkpen_Scroll

shattered_quill

It's ok. It will still be there when you finish kings cage :)
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Inkpen_Scroll

 I wish I could read your new FanFiction Broken Crown, but I haven't read King's Cage yet :(
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Inkpen_Scroll

Thank you so much! 
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walterswrites

So, about Flaming Shadow, I was thinking you could have an epic battle between the Lakeland Royals and Maven and then he is wounded badly.  Since Maven is weak, the nation is weak.  The armies have orders to attack the Lakelands making defenses inside Norta mininal.  Of course the palace is still heavily guarded.  The Scarlet Guard, along with Mare, attack the capital.  The attack kills many Scarlet Guard members and Silver Elite alike.  Mare sneaks into the palace with a newblood who can change one's appearance.  Cal is also with them disguised as a sentinal bc the newblood isn't strong enough to disguise them both.  They make it to the war bunker where Maven is camped out and attack.  They discreetly disable Maven but don't kill him.  He is gagged so he can't scream for help.  They smuggle him out and take him hostage.  The Scarlet Guard makes an announcement that the traitor prince was framed and while he has blood on his hands he was wronged.  The remaining Scarlet Guard move into the capital, which is a mess, along with Lakelanders who want to get their son back.  Cal is reinstated, although trust is not inmediate, and Mare and him get married.  The Lakelanders go home, Red and Silver equality gradually is integrated into society.  Tib is born as a symbol of Red and Silver coincidence.  Maven is killed publicly for his crimes, the Scarlet Guard disband and go their seperate ways, the battle won.  Happily Ever After!  Also, Cal should be injured during the kidnapping of Maven to keep the readers on edge. 
          
          Side note: if you use this idea, please name the newblood with glamouring powers Bailey, and make it a girl.  
          
          Thank you for your time! ❤

shattered_quill

I LOVE this idea! Thank you. I will make sure to give you a shout out! 
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shattered_quill

How did I not see this until today? 
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walterswrites

@nervousnelly also, Mare would be disguised as Evangeline and Cal would just be an accompaning sentinal and Bailey, the newblood, would be disguised as another magnetron from House Samos.
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