Hi sweetzahra, hope you're good. Anyways I've been enjoying your story so far and well, it's been good. I just want to say one thing to you. I'm not sure what it feels like sharing a story and hoping others like it too. Must be terrifying, but if there's one thing I'm sure of, it's that if I ever did that I'd want to be happy with what I wrote, even if they (the readers) don't looove it. So take your time writing it and build all the suspense you'd like, we, the readers aren't going anywhere there's no need to rush. Enjoy the writing as much as we'll enjoy the reading. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Later
