theonlymrschalamet

Hey guys! So I've been writing a story called Unforgettable... its dystopian and I was just hoping i could get some feedback on it. It's got only four parts but if yoy could just go through it and comment your thoughts, and any constructive critiscm that i could use to make my writing better, that will make my day! 
          	
          	Thanks!
          	- Fauziyah xx

theonlymrschalamet

Hey guys! So I've been writing a story called Unforgettable... its dystopian and I was just hoping i could get some feedback on it. It's got only four parts but if yoy could just go through it and comment your thoughts, and any constructive critiscm that i could use to make my writing better, that will make my day! 
          
          Thanks!
          - Fauziyah xx