jasminethejay

Hey, do you mind reading my book: We Don't Talk Anymore? I just would like some feedback

jasminethejay

@jasminethejay thanks and I'll remember to proofread.:-) 
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tuuuulipan

@jasminethejay I thought it was pretty good. There were some spelling mistakes, but that's alright. I don't know if you proofread and I don't want to offend you,  (I'm sorry if I do.)but it's good to do multiple times, just in case you miss something, or then you realize you might not like you wrote. That happens to me a lot when I write essays. In all honestly though I think that you're good writer. Good luck on all of your stories as well. Don't forget you are an amazing and beautiful person! :) lots of love to you. <3
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_Niall_is_life

I LOVE YOU SO FREAKING MUCH xD

tuuuulipan

@_Niall_is_life it's alright. But we'll see...hope you're doing great. Love you!
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_Niall_is_life

I just realized the mistake xD Oops
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_Niall_is_life

Counted all my mistakes and there's only one standing out from the list I've done all the rest of my crimes don't come close to the look on your face when I let go So I built you house from a broken home and I wrote a song with the words you spoke yeah it took me some time to figure out how to lift up a heart that I let down! ~N.H ❤ 
          I get major feels from hearing Niall sing this❤

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  he yours and my dork:) I'm okay sharing him with you. Shh don't tell my other friends! 
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_Niall_is_life

@thehappybundle Exactly! gdksks gosh I love that dork :) 
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tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  I know! When I first heard the song I died when it was him who started and it was a long solo! asdfghjkl what is life?
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_Niall_is_life

Lets have another toast to the girl almighty! *points at you* 
          { Gooood morning! )
          ☁☁☁☁☁☀☁☀
          ☁❤❤☁❤❤☀☁
          ❤❤❤❤❤☀❤☀
          ❤❤❤❤☀❤❤☁
          ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤☁
          ☁❤❤❤❤❤☁☁
          ☁☀❤❤❤☁☁
          ☀☁☁❤☁☁☁
          
          ( Have a nice day♪}
          

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  You are the girl almighty here!:D Toast to you.
            Well good morning to you too or afternoon depending on where you are. Hope you have a beautiful day beautiful child!
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_Niall_is_life

My Sunday was pretty lazy. I was in a wedding on Saturday :D
          .
          How was your Sunday? You beautiful/amazing child ✌

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  yes and :') so proud
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_Niall_is_life

@thehappybundle Ooohhhh did you see the picture of Larry holding hands yesterday ✌ And my dad (Liam Payne) turned freaking 22! and then its going to be Niall! :') 
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_Niall_is_life

:D NO CONTROL NO CONTROLLLL :D 

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  How is your Sunday beautiful child?
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tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  YESS. NO EFFING CONTROL
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_Niall_is_life

Sorry I didn't respond yesterday i was busy :( But hey school is going good so far (being in 8th grade and taking high school classes is the real struggle✌) I hope your doing great in school❤ ily & you're awesome ✌

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  It's okay. I get that, I'm in highschool(10th). Well good thing is your going to be better prepared than me! Anyways I'm doing good. Not stressed yet. right now I am in art. Ily too and you are both awesome and beautiful! :D
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_Niall_is_life

Hi love x You're probably in school (I just got out of school) but just was wondering How are you? and How is school? :D Hope you have a smile on your face cause you're beautiful   <3 ❤❤ 

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  this just made me smile. I'm out now. School is okay and I'm good. How are you today you beautiful person?
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_Niall_is_life

How are you? x

tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  better*
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tuuuulipan

@ _Niall_is_life  oh. well take some medicine for the dizziness? i hope you feel bettet
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_Niall_is_life

@thehappybundle yeah I feel dizzy now xD I took nap and I woke up all dizzy
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