twistingtelomeres

Hi guys,
          	
          	TDWS needs a rewrite badly. It has issues with pacing, story setting and structure, character development among others. 
          	
          	I wrote the story 2 years ago over summer when I was home from university. I'm not a writer, nor am I doing a degree similar. The reason I took it up was because it was the furthest thing I could imagine from the work I do, and hence it's the perfect 'escape' from my studies despite my passion for them. 
          	
          	I'll be finishing my degree this year. This coming summer, you'll either see a full scale rewrite uploaded or I'll abandon the thought. There is another story I had planned to write and publish upon hitting 20k words, but that needs writing let alone rewriting.
          	
          	If you enjoyed anything I've made, please critique me without holds barred. It's a necessary action for me to have any hope of improvement.
          	
          	-J

twistingtelomeres

Hi guys,
          
          TDWS needs a rewrite badly. It has issues with pacing, story setting and structure, character development among others. 
          
          I wrote the story 2 years ago over summer when I was home from university. I'm not a writer, nor am I doing a degree similar. The reason I took it up was because it was the furthest thing I could imagine from the work I do, and hence it's the perfect 'escape' from my studies despite my passion for them. 
          
          I'll be finishing my degree this year. This coming summer, you'll either see a full scale rewrite uploaded or I'll abandon the thought. There is another story I had planned to write and publish upon hitting 20k words, but that needs writing let alone rewriting.
          
          If you enjoyed anything I've made, please critique me without holds barred. It's a necessary action for me to have any hope of improvement.
          
          -J

twistingtelomeres

I'm sorry for the silence! Truthfully, I've been caught up with my studies and can't find the time to write. 
          
          I still make extensive plans for the plot of TDWS and a story I'm aspiring to write. It's likely that any new chapters will be released towards the summer time, but I have no plans of dropping anything.
          
          I see and love you all.

twistingtelomeres

I've finally found a good method of working. 
          
          Chapter 10 is being proofread right now, and will be released on the 5th. Afterwards, each new chapter will come out on the Monday of each week.
          
          Hopefully you are all enjoying thus far! I don't have any experience with writing or with English studies, so please message me if you think I've made a mistake with my grammar, if there's any holes in the plot or if you're confused about anything. <3

twistingtelomeres

I realise I've been glossing over any deep emotional connections too much, so I'll be sure to add much more detail into the actual relationship dynamics between Issei and everyone. Apologies everyone, but I'll do my best! <333
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