Hi guys,
TDWS needs a rewrite badly. It has issues with pacing, story setting and structure, character development among others.
I wrote the story 2 years ago over summer when I was home from university. I'm not a writer, nor am I doing a degree similar. The reason I took it up was because it was the furthest thing I could imagine from the work I do, and hence it's the perfect 'escape' from my studies despite my passion for them.
I'll be finishing my degree this year. This coming summer, you'll either see a full scale rewrite uploaded or I'll abandon the thought. There is another story I had planned to write and publish upon hitting 20k words, but that needs writing let alone rewriting.
If you enjoyed anything I've made, please critique me without holds barred. It's a necessary action for me to have any hope of improvement.
-J