Katienight66

I wanted to ask if you like my story and if you have any suggestions I can use

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@Katienight66 
            Okay, about a pet... maybe a dog (I just really love dogs, especially puppies ) 
            But if you want to turn more in the direction of such a mystical pet, You can check on Pinterest, there are lots of amazing things there!
            Regarding village names, I don't have that many ideas  But try checking with artificial intelligence bots or even just Google...
            
            By the way, just good advice from a reader to a writer. 
            I think it would be to try to reduce transitions from one character's point of view to another in order to keep a clean and clear reading (Maybe I don't write books on Wattpad, but I write a lot but I'm not really ready to publish my materials)
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Katienight66

@ Katienight66  yea tips like if you want y/n to have a pet or something like that or to moxi and maybe you have villan names I can use because I'm working on a new villan
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user39826233

@Katienight66  
            Hi, your story is very nice and I would really like to continue reading it☺️
            By the way, when you say 'suggestions' do you mean 'how to proceed' Or do you mean... tips for a book?
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