violet_hemingway
Hi everyone!
I have started a new book. It'd be amazing if you guys would check it out and give me some feedback
violet_hemingway
NinaNorstrom0
You are so welcome!
NinaNorstrom0
NP, that's what we authors do. Be honest in our reviewing of others work.
icursedgurl
HEYYYYY IM WWL - I LOVE ZAYN OKAY ON THE DANDELLION GRO CHAT
NinaNorstrom0
I'm sure the author wanted to give this story their best. But I was a bit surprised in the way the story read. Lacked characterization, scene, editing and proofreading.
violet_hemingway
@NinaNorstrom0 I have edited the chapters and there aren't anymore errors. Thank you so much for pointing my mistakes out
violet_hemingway
@NinaNorstrom0 I know and I'm really sorry for that. This I my first attempt and I wrote the chapters on my phone so I request you to ignore the typos. I have tried to do a better job from chapter 5. Plzz go and check. And yeah thank you so much for making these points.