xariz_dmeza

@EmilyAndDestiny ur welcome and hey if u like the way the stories going then don't change a thing do what feels write.

River-chan7

@xariz_dmeza well i mostly write them in class so im more rushed and my mind wonders alot, but when it comes to typing stuff out i always change somethings and add something things.
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xariz_dmeza

@EmilyAndDestiny ur welcome and hey if u like the way the stories going then don't change a thing do what feels write.

River-chan7

@xariz_dmeza well i mostly write them in class so im more rushed and my mind wonders alot, but when it comes to typing stuff out i always change somethings and add something things.
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xariz_dmeza

@EmilyAndDestiny well maybe it is going a little fast in chapter 3. Maybe u could continue the story from where she wakes up looking at Zach and then continue it by explains how the day went and how training was going. And then copy and paste the 2 months later part and put it as a chapter four.

River-chan7

@xariz_dmeza see i already wrote chapter four, buttttt i could always make some few changes here and there! so thanks! ill make sure not to go too tooo fast for now on.
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