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          	I just published "Chapter 47: Just talk to me." of my story "Just Another Distraction? (Ongoing)". https://www.wattpad.com/1159095765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=xoxo_nov4

Inkszzean

hello, Author
          
          i read your story and i have feedback about it, i hope you don't get it wrong! it's for improvement and not to criticize you! 
          
          i just noticed the spaces in the situation and dialogue! you can just put one space or 2 space and then go for another situation. and also i just noticed the dialogue, it's so short and not too well explained why there's something! that's it. hehehe
          
          but your storyline was good and nice enough to be read, thank you for reading! ✨

xoxo_nov4

@Inkszzean hello thank youu po sa pag critic hehehe, may iba pa po ba kayong na pansin?
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