Zoe

Hi. I loved End Of Innocence so much but I felt that the other characters especially those that suffered from the consequences of Serena's actions with the exception of Tanner were too forgiving making it unreal. Right now, it comes across like she is getting away with what she did to Liam. He was also a victim, having him take the fall for Serena's actions is victim blaming. 
          
          Your premise is great, but the execution needs to be improved. Serena isn't a sympathetic character. In fact,  she is quite unrepentant. She doesn't really show regret for her actions. You should focus on that part of her character while reworking and editing the story. I look forward to your future work.

The end of innocence is totally amazing..loved it..a book without any cliche cheesy plot is just what u need on a day off

Hey, thank you for checking out My Hungry Friend and for the votes! Hope you’re having a nice week :)

If you're looking for something to read this summer, I have a new book!
          
          It's called Lure, and it's a set of interconnected stories all set in a world where people are matched with their soulmate at birth. The stories range from cute love stories to tragic mishaps in the system. It's a blend of different genres, and each story is a little different, so everyone will find something that suits their taste.
          
          The prologue has already been posted, and the first short story is coming next week!

Thanks for the follow!!!

Thanks for adding my books, Zoe!! Have a nice day x

The Prologue of "The End of Innocence " is Wow

Thanks so much for the follow, Zoe!

Thank you Zoe for adding ‘The Devil’s Master’ to your reading list! Have a fab 2018 :)

@NuellaUguruChi Thanks! That's so nice of you. What I have posted is actually a few drafts behind the one I'm sending to agents, but I'm glad to hear that it's still not terrible.