Look sorry to be harsh on you buuuut,here's the critics: when luka and adrien date we don't know how it started and suddenly he thinks of breaking up with him when mari reveals herself *not that I hate adrienette I ship it badly* but I think there should be more proves he loves mari ,now second one where's the badass mari ?author-chan ,I don't think that he deserves mari if he slaps his because of his gay emo boyfriend talking bullshits and yes I said it gay emo boyfriend I'm not against the lgbqt but in the first place luka doesn't deserve Adrien. Seriously, I didn't finish to read but I'm sure it will end "adrienette ship " for sure *confident of myself*soooo,author-chan this is my critics and don't take it bad paw-lease
