So those were the first 4 chapters of my first story.
I would really like some feedback, how are you finding it? Any criticism that would help me improve?
Please remember to vote and comment, I'd love to hear and see that you are enjoying this.
I'll be posting again in a week or just a couple of days.
Thank you,
Vee
YOU ARE READING
Hush now {DDLB}
General FictionOwen is being sold. He's scared and frightened of the outside world. With his new daddy Richy to help him, he's sure to have a better life. Richard has always wanted a little and upon hearing about a centre selling them he doesn't waste any time. He...
