I get kicked in the family jewels

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I feel elated that my story has crossed the 1k views mark . This means a lot to me. And it is thanks to all of you that this happened. You are an awesome set of readers.

Sorry for this delay. I have no other excuse other than the fact that I have become completely hooked to F.R.I.E.N.D.S. So, I spent the time that I usually give writing, watching the amazing series. (By the way, Joey Tribbiani is and will remain my favorite character.) Comment me your reviews of the show. But please do not give spoilers.😂

Moreover, I see that there is confusion regarding the age where Percy gets his immortality. You see, Odin may be able to see the future, but even his ability can see only so far. So, he believes that after the war against Kronos is over, Percy should get his immortality back. So, he places a spell on his grandson that he will turn immortal when he turns 16. This is what I wrote in the first chapter.

But, the Fates know that without Percy, defeating the earth mother is practically impossible. So, they remove Odin's spell and place a spell of their own that Percy will turn immortal when he turns 18, so that by the time, the war against Gaia is over. Now I know that Odin is one of the strongest beings, but even he is powerless before the three old ladies with mean cudgels.

Also, let me assure you. In this story, Percy is going to be a badass. He won't be taking anyone's shit. The only reason he is wary of Artemis right now is because he doesn't know his true power. Also, won't you be scared if a thousand year old teenager held you at knife point?
Yeah, thought so. So, please bear with me. Eventually, Percy is gonna show everyone why they shouldn't mess with him.

I'll give you a hint about how I will show this. It is an event I will show during the first quest. Keep thinking about it. And review it. Will give me even more ideas to proceed the story. XD

I hope you understood this and there are no queries about this in the future.

Also, what is a beta reader? I was just checking the app when I saw it. If anyone would be kind enough to explain about it, I would really appreciate it.

Please comment any suggestions or criticism that you find in this story. It really helps me improve my writing. I have tried my best to proofread this story, but in the end, I am a human. Also, f*** this auto correct. I try typing dick and it turns to duck. F*** turns to fuss.

Anyways, onward with the story.

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Last time:

Looking up, I saw Chloe laughing at me. Seeing her laugh made my heart warm.
My heart burst with joy when I felt the sibling relation start forming between us. That's when I vowed that I would protect my niece to the best that I can.

Using the water to propel myself, I landed beside Chloe. Seeing that she was still sweating, I placed a hand on her shoulder and willed the sweat to dry off.

She seemed surprised, but gave me a nod of appreciation. I nodded back and we started walking back to the hunters camp, talking and laughing all the way back.

By the time I got back to my tent, I was extremely tired. I changed to my pajamas and removed my shirt.

As I was about to drift to sleep, I thought,
"Maybe my time with the hunters won't be so bad after all. Well, let's at least wish it won't be. Though I will have to find out what Zoë's problem really is. I haven't personally offended her, yet she seems to want to make my life a living hell."

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