Finally the wait has come to an end💃
APPRECIATION
I want to Specially thank the judges;
@EmrysRhodri
@CatLoverHope
@bored_mamaThanks for making this award a success, thank you for taking your time to Judge these books.
I also want to thank all the participants, thanks for making this award a success, it wouldn't have been possible without you guys.Note: Everyone is a winner. Remember this is just an idea of one person. Regardless of what the results says, your book is amazing and you're an amazing author.
Drum 🥁 roll..............
10th Place;
Book Title; A Night To Remember- Author Name; @Lillian_Ambrose2601
The opening chapter is interesting. There isn't a note anywhere explaining the use of Italian in the character dialogue. Having to translate a lot of the conversations outside of Wattpad wasn't great. It wasn't until after that I realized the author had written the translations as comments. Still I would have preferred strong context clues along with it to at least understand the gist without having to search. Having to translate disrupted the flow. A note at the top at least explaining the translations were in the comments would have helped at least! With the previously mentioned thoughts and the chapter's context I'm not sure I would want to read more in the present state!
Score: 30/50Book Title; Miraculously Crossover: Ladybug and Pokémon Fusion
Author Name: @pokebug74
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: Honestly, no. It's like I'm killing time.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: No. it felt like they were puppets. They didn't really have anything special to them; something that would intrigue readers.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Answer: Not really. It feels like I'm in my sibling's classroom for a day and just sat there doing nothing.
How is the Author's writing style?
Answer: The writing style isn't very good. There are numerous grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes. Also, the characters are portrayed in a way that nobody will be interested.
Score: 30/509th Place;
Book Title; Of the sea
Author Name; @Harvard_Girl9836
Hook: 6/10
Emotions toward characters: 5/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 6/10
Writing style: 6/10
Language and grammar: 10/10
Score: 33/508th Place;
Book Title; The new beginning
Author Name; @kelladaisy113
Hook: 5/10
Emotions toward characters: 9/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 6/10
Writing style: 8/10
Language and grammar: 7/10
Score: 35/507th Place;
Book Title; Zog mysticals
Author Name; @daephnix
Hook: 9/10
Emotions toward characters: 8/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 8/10
Writing style: 7/10
Language and grammar: 8/10
Score: 40/50Book Title; The Royal Patron Author Name; @_arushiganla
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: I have better books in my library, so I probably wouldn't, if i were the reader.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: Yes, and I like that. The author has showed different sides to the main character as well as introduced the side-characters in a good way.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Yes, it does. Though I don't really think I would go for it.
How is the Author's writing style?
The author's writing style is really good. I like it.
Score: 40/50
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