I have multiple things for this rant... so go get yo popcorn and ya slushie.. this is going to be a long one.
Okay, so for one thing you say edited.... YOU SAY EDITED and I still see mistakes... and recently I have become a grammah nazy (That is supposed to be spelt wrong so calm yo farm Logan.)
I was actually reading a book recently and it actually said...
"Yeah, so I wes looking through the bok case and I ound that thefirst"
OH MY GOD
IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE EDITED... AND ITS NOT BLOODY EDITED!
And oh my god........ the amount of problems with "there, their, they're." and "Where, were."
and just so much I sometimes think I might cry whilst reading your story.
And yes, that does mean I'll end up crying when the wedding scene was happening... and trust me it wasnt of happiness.
So please actually edit your story, it doesn't have to be flawless,
just...
a little better
thank youuuuuuuuuu
